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Sep 26 2009, 06:51 PM
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This is my first attempt at writing a The Simpsons Fanfiction so here is Chapter 1
Please tell me what you think and please tell me if you think i should continue on with posting it Anyways here is the 1st chapter ENJOY! Chapter 1 One morning Lisa woke up and got out of bed and went down stairs to breakfast and she found Marge, Bart, Homer and Maggie sitting down waiting for Lisa to join them for breakfast. “Good Morning Mum, Dad, Bart and Maggie.” Said Lisa. “Good morning Lisa, How are you?” asked Marge. “Good morning Lisa.” Says Homer. “Good morning Lisa.” Grumbled Bart. “I am fine thankyou Mum.” Answered Lisa. “That's good to hear honey.” Says Marge. “What are we doing today?” asked Lisa. “Well we are going to see Grandpa Simpson and take him to Krusty’s Burgers for lunch today.” Answered Homer. “I am hungry Mum what’s for breakfast?” asked a grumpy Bart. “Pancakes.” Answered Marge. “Yummy mummy.” Says Maggie. “Shut the hell up Maggie.” Swore Homer. Maggie then burst into tears which got her pulling her dummy out of her mouth and throwing it across the breakfast table and hitting the wall and landing on the floor near Santa’s Little Helper who was lying down near the doorway leading into the lounge room. “Mum, Homer said a very naughty word to Maggie.” Said Bart. “Homer that was not a very nice thing to say to Maggie, you apologise to her now.” said Marge with an angry look on her face. “Oh do I have to apologise to Maggie?” asked Homer. “Yes Dad you have to apologise to Maggie because you were rude to her and you upset her.” Answered Lisa. “Oh all right I will apologise then just to make Marge happy.” Said Homer. “You know you don't have to do it to make me happy Homie, you need to apologise because what you said to Maggie was not very nice at all.” Says Marge. Homer got up out of his seat and walked over to Maggie’s high chair and said “I am sorry Maggie for swearing at you.” Then Bart got up and went over to where Maggie’s dummy landed over near Santa’s Little Helper at the doorway to the lounge room and picked it up and went over to Maggie and popped it back in her mouth. Marge got up and went to start cooking the pancakes and while she was cooking the pancakes Homer started talking about something funny that happened at work yesterday. Then when Marge had finished cooking the pancakes she served them to all 5 plates and then she took them over to the breakfast table and handed the plates one by one to everyone and then sat down to eat her plate of pancakes with the rest of the family. “Bart earlier you were in a bad mood what were you in a bad mood for?” asked Lisa. “I was in a bad mood because I had a fight with Millhouse yesterday at school.” Answered Bart. “Oh Bart that's awful is Millhouse not talking to you now?” asked Homer. “No but I am going to call him after we get back from the retirement Castle to see Grandpa.” Answered Bart. “Well I hope you both sort out your issues Bart.” Says Lisa. “Me too Lis.” Says Bart. So everyone eat in silence and then when everyone had finished eating their pancakes Marge got up and took all the plates over to the sink so that they were there when they were needed to be washed so they could be used again. -------------------- |
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Sep 29 2009, 04:32 PM
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Bump
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Jan 24 2010, 11:34 AM
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i will post chapter 2 later
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Jan 24 2010, 02:37 PM
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Wow I love the first chapter, I don't really like watching the Simpsons, But I didn't mind reading it !
You should continue to write the next chapter -------------------- ![]() | Jack/Martha | Belle/Aden | Annie/Romeo | |
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Jan 25 2010, 03:08 PM
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Here is an update
Chapter 2 Lisa, Bart, Homer, Marge and Maggie went to get ready for the day out, Marge got Maggie dressed and then organised Maggie’s nappy bag and other baby accessories so that she could take them as well as Maggie with her and the rest of the family, Marge went and got dressed into her green dress and then she popped her beaded necklace and shoes on and then she brushed her long blue hair and teeth. Homer got his jeans, white shirt and shoes on and then he washed his face and then did his teeth and then Marge, Maggie and Homer went to check up on Lisa and Bart to see if they had gotten dressed and had done their hair and teeth, Lisa and Bart were dressed and had done their hair and teeth also. “Are you both ready to go to see your grandfather and to go to Krusty’s Burgers for lunch?” asked Marge. “Yes we are ready to go and see grandpa mum.” Answered Bart. “Good come on then let’s go and see Grandpa and go to Krusty’s burgers for lunch.” Said Marge. So then Marge, Homer, Maggie, Bart and Lisa locked the house up and went out to the car and Marge popped Maggie in the backseat into her car seat and then hopped in the front with Homer and then Bart and Lisa hopped in the back with Maggie and everyone closed their doors and then Homer started the car engine and then pulled out of the driveway and as they were about to pull out of the driveway, a voice called out Homer’s name and kept calling out and calling out and the voice who was calling out to Homer was Ned Flanders who lives next door to the Simpsons family. “Homer.” Ned called out. “What Flanders?” asked Homer. “Can you do me a huge favour please.” Answered Ned. “What is the favour Flanders?” asked Homer. “Would you be able to grab a tub of ice-cream from Quickie Mart for me please?” asked Ned. “No go to Quickie Mart and get it yourself Flanders.” Answered Homer. “Okie dokie then.” Says Ned. So then Homer, Marge, Maggie, Bart and Lisa pulled out of the driveway and left to go to see Grandpa Simpson at the Springfield Retirement Home and to catch up with him and to go to Krusty’s burgers for lunch as a family. “Homer that was not a very nice way to talk to Ned, he was just asking you to do him a simple favour and you just told him to go do it himself.” Says Marge. When the family arrived at the Retirement home Everyone got out and Marge got Maggie and her Nappy bag out of the car and then when everyone was finally out of the car, they all closed all the car doors and Homer locked it up and the whole family went indoors to see Grandpa Simpson and they talked to Grandpa for a little while. “Hi Dad.” Said Homer. “Hi Son.” Said Grandpa. “Hi Grandpa.” Says Marge, Lisa and Bart all together at the same time. "Hi Marge, Lisa, Maggie and Bart.” Says Grandpa. “Dad we are going to Krusty’s Burgers for lunch would you like to come with us?” asked Homer. “Yes I would love to come with you all to lunch.” Answered Grandpa. “Awesome Grandpa.” Said Lisa. So Lisa, Maggie, Bart, Marge, Homer and Grandpa all left and went and got in the car and made their way to Krusty’s Burgers for lunch so they could enjoy a great lunch meal. When they arrived to Krusty’s Burgers, they all got out and Marge got Maggie out of the baby seat in the back and then all the doors closed and then Homer locked the car up and they all went indoors and organised their meals and then found a table near the window and Marge sat Maggie in the high chair and then she sat down with the rest of the family. Then the family waited for their meals to arrive on their table and when the meals finally arrive, everyone eat and talked and then after they all finished eating their meals they all went home and rested up. -------------------- |
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